I do not think that he is middle-aged. I think he is a lot older than that. Also he would not have been last seen at a clinic because he is in Auschwitz. The picture does look like what I think he would look like. Also a little bit more detail about him is needed.
Pro’s: *I enjoyed the part that said to get hurt in order to get Pavel’s attention, I found it super funny. *Always wears a smile is a nice touch. Con’s: *Isn’t Pavel bald? *Pavel isn’t a doctor anymore.
I do not think that he is middle-aged. I think he is a lot older than that. Also he would not have been last seen at a clinic because he is in Auschwitz. The picture does look like what I think he would look like. Also a little bit more detail about him is needed.
ReplyDeleteI like the looks part and the last seen part too. I think you could have improved on his age and the if found part.
ReplyDeleteI think he is older than middle aged and you could have added more about if you found him. I like the format and you described him well.
ReplyDeletePro’s: *I enjoyed the part that said to get hurt in order to get Pavel’s attention, I found it super funny. *Always wears a smile is a nice touch.
ReplyDeleteCon’s: *Isn’t Pavel bald? *Pavel isn’t a doctor anymore.